Brylies uncle, Marcel Rodeka came to our school and played the drums. He rocks. He plays jazz and rock and roll. That him gets a lot of money. Some day I’ll be as good as him.
By Ben M
*If you look further down our blog you will find a vocaroo post. Just click on the vocaroo arrow and you will get to hear some of his drumming.
I like that you used capital letters and fullstops. But i wish you had proof read it.Madison
ReplyDeleteBen M ,Nice work but next time proof read it . Next time put your capital letters and full stops in the right spot.Devon.
ReplyDeleteI love it but next time please proof read it from Ripeka
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