We are a wonderful class of year 3-4 children who absolutely love learning and in particular writing. We are going to take turns daily to write on the blog - so please forgive us if you find mistakes - it's all part of our learning. We would love you to post feedback on our blog as this helps us develop our writing even further.
Avalon, Ben and Tyler - I just checked out your blog and came across your fantastic Twisted Tales. I really enjoyed reading them and the individual twists you included in each tale. I hope you don't mind, but I would like to start reading these to Room 7 during Read 'n' Feed time later on this week? Awesome work - I can't wait to hear some more Twisted Tales from Room 9 :)
Hello again Room 9! A teacher from the USA asked me to check out some writing that one of his students has been working on.... I thought you might enjoy it - Keegan is writing fractured fairy tales :) http://kidblog.org/2cndHourTigers2/keegan36/my-fairy-tales/#comment-7
that is a very good story you guys are doing well like someone posted a comment on my blog and said don't ever lose your imagination i t will get you through crazy stuff like getting good grades and its fun to see what you can do good job.
Great work Avalon you really got that story excited now it really feels like I'm in fantasy world.I was getting scared when the Big Fat Pig was going to eat the scared little wolfs luckily they escaped propaly. Great to see what you can do.Devon.
What a great twisted tail, its lucky the three little wolves got away before they became dinner!
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Avalon, Ben and Tyler - I just checked out your blog and came across your fantastic Twisted Tales. I really enjoyed reading them and the individual twists you included in each tale. I hope you don't mind, but I would like to start reading these to Room 7 during Read 'n' Feed time later on this week? Awesome work - I can't wait to hear some more Twisted Tales from Room 9 :)
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that is a very good story you guys are doing well like someone posted a comment on my blog and said don't ever lose your imagination i t will get you through crazy stuff like getting good grades and its fun to see what you can do good job.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Avalon you really got that story excited now it really feels like I'm in fantasy world.I was getting scared when the Big Fat Pig was going to eat the scared little wolfs luckily they escaped propaly. Great to see what you can do.Devon.
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